Some Nationalist Socialist Grammar notes: (inner word caps used for emphasis)
http://almarsguides.com/eq/gettingstarted/
"will take you less thEn 12 hours" -- thEn is for describing something chronologically (e.g. we went to the store then we saw a movie) or the result of a conditional (e.g. if this then that). thAn is used when making a comparison. Consider the sentance 'I'd rather have a root canal then see a Barbara Streisand movie'. Using thEn would mean you'd still be stuck seeing a BS movie, but at least it'd be after your root canal. If you'd used thAn instead, then you'd need only get the root canal and wouldn't have to endure a BS movie.
"every once in awhile" -- when awhile is an adverb it's written as a single word. When it's the object of a preposition (as it is with your usage), it should be written as two words ('a while').
"is it to late to jump" -- 'to' is a verb modifier, as in 'to jump', where you have it correctly used. It is not used when described a degree of something. In that case, you'll want to use the word 'too' (with two O's). This phrase should be 'is it toO late to jump'. The third homonym is for the number 2. It is spelled tWo
There are several problems with the answer to this question. The then/than error is there as is the to/too error. The second sentence might sound better if it were started as "With the addition of mercenaries, you can catch..." - notice the removal of 'especially' and the addition of the comma after the (uncapitalized) mercenaries.
http://almarsguides.com/eq/general/spells.cfm
"are 4 different types of Magic's. Alteration, Conjuration, Divination, Evocation and Abjuration." -- You say there are four, but then you list five.
" in EQ, If you've played Morrowind before you'll" -- There should be a period after EQ instead of a comma. And a comma after Morrowind.
The distinction between Abjuration and Alteration is that hp buffs are typically Abjuration while all other buffs (e.g. stat buffs) are Alteration.
"caster (Or can even cast spells) You'll" Neither the 'or' nor the 'You'll' need to be capitalized. You might want to put a comma after the close parenthesis.
"Meditation used to increase your mana regen out of combat and In-combat." -- Unless something has changed, this is incorrect. Meditation skill increases your mana regen when you're meditation. You are meditation when you're either sitting down or on a mount without autoattack on. The regen rate is greatly increased once you're 'out of combat'.
"spell being canceled when" -- You should probably use the word 'interrupted' instead of canceled.
Regarding memmed spells, you might want to mention that you can right click on the spell gem to unmem it. Right clicking on an empty spell gem will also bring up a menu allowing you to chose which spell to mem in its place (this avoids having to keep track of where you put a spell in your spellbook). Bards have the same mechanics for songs as casters do for spells.
http://almarsguides.com/eq/general/mercenaries.cfm
"choose from Healers and Tanking" -- put a colon after from. Either switch Healers to Healing or switch Tanking to Tanks.
"well its not" -- its is the possessive form of it (e.g. That is a school bus. Its color is yellow). What you are trying to say is 'well it is not'. For that, you need to use the contraction "it's". It's means only one of two things, either "it is" or "it has", never anything else.
"merc can solo any reds from levels" -- you might want to change that to 'yellows'. There's a lot of red mobs at level 10 that a merc isn't going to have any chance of killing (e.g. The Avatar of War). Changing it to yellow keeps it within scale of the players level.
"Same goes for a male" -- it's not really the same. If it were the same, you'd get a female merc in both cases. You probably want to use the word 'Similar'.
"Reach. (Granted you Start there) The" -- The period shouldn't be after Reach but rather after the close paranthesis. Granted doesn't need to be captialized and should be followed by the word 'if'.
"He couldn't of made it THAT easy." The word 'of' should never ever ever follow the words Could, Would, or Should. Granted, when people talk, it sounds like they're saying 'of'. What they're really saying is 'have' (e.g. Could have, Would have, Should have).
"You can do 1-40 in about 12 hours of playing, then it starts to slow down." -- That's a run on sentence. Change that comma to a period.
"my merc on a LDoN" -- The modifier for LDoN should be aN. The rule isn't whether the word starts with a vowel or consenant, but rather if the word sounds like it starts with a vowel or consenant. LDoN is pronounced Elledawn, which starts with a vowel. A common example of this is the word hour ('an hour' sounds more appropriate than 'a hour'). You got it correct in the subsequent question.
"No your mercenary comes equipped" -- put a period or comma after No.
http://almarsguides.com/eq/general/aas.cfm
"Luclin expansion, AA stands for Alternate" -- Another run on. Change that comma to a period.
"generally a Expansion" -- a/an - see above.
"to that later, first lets start with" -- Another run on. Change that comma to a period.
"Hit "i" to open your inventory and look at the bottom of the window." -- Pressing V takes you straight to the AA window without the need for clicking through your inventory window.
"of AA's in it, click on them" -- Another run on. Change that comma to a period.
"Cost is how many AA's it costs to put 1 point into it" -- Cost is how many AA points it takes to get the next level of it. An AA 'point' is what you get after completing the five yellow bubbles of AAXP, not the levels in any particular AA.
"into it and finally Category" -- Another run on. Put a period after 'it'.
You may also want to mention that you'll need to be level 51 (or maybe 50) before you can start to earn AAXP and that you can have up to 30 AA points banked (unspent) before you can no longer earn AAXP.
Also, for the LXP, you must be the leader of the group to earn LXP. If you want to earn LXP and aren't the leader, the leader can mentor you. The benefits of your LXP only have effect when you're the leader of a group of three or more. This is similar for raids except that for raids, you'll need to have at least 18 people in them.
http://almarsguides.com/eq/zones/revamps.cfm
"to look nice new and pretty" -- put a comma after nice.
http://www.almarsguides.com/eq/gene...al/grouping.cfm
"is much different then other games" -- thEn/thAn
"less interesting then it really is" -- thEn/thAn