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The first draft version of that, for the sake of comparison, although not all that much changed really: scene 1 - zoom out from inert Wright to Architect viewing in his monitoring room - a: where is thy humanity now... - a: agent gray - gray appears on monitor - g: sir? - a: have you located the program? - g: no, sir; not since it terminated Wright. - g: we have found zion operatives conducting their own search. - a: ... - g: sir? - a: prepare for our visitors - clicks screen off
scene 2 - ghost lands on a slum building rooftop, looks around, opens a door and goes down a dark stairway - enters a large darkened storage room, doesn't see anything, turns to leave - screen flicks on behind him - s: ghost. - ghost turns and looks at it, face blank - code shimmers in the air and falls down, forming around a standing female body - ghost stands frozen - trinity takes a step toward him, stops - t: ghost... - ghost flinches - trinity looks pained - g: I... - t: I didn't know - p: freeze - pace steps from the doorway into the glow of the monitor/trinity, gun levelled at g - p looks at g - p: predictable. - p: hmh. - p put her gun up, half turns away - p: your program...friend cannot survive here - g looks at p - p: she will be removed. a code lock is already-- - h & ts appear in midair, float down to the floor - p puts her gun back on g - ts: ooh. this looks fun. - p touches her earpiece, listens, looks frustrated - p: ... acknowledged. - pace stalks out - h: and you? will you offer resistance? - g: no need - h looks around; trinity has vanished - h: is this your-- - ghost has vanished - ts: hah! this *will* be fun - h & ts vanish, room goes dark - a shadow hops up to a high window: ookami
scene 3 - ghost is standing on the roof, looking out over the city - g: trinity...
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 12/18/2008 17:12:56
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Storyboard animatic: 
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 12/18/2008 17:15:57
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Lol, I love your drawing of Wright!
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 12/18/2008 17:17:28
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Just wait until you come to the actual "lol"...
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 12/18/2008 17:33:13
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Heh. *two thumbs up* (and yes... am still here -.O) 
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 12/18/2008 18:47:33
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Message edited by Rarebit on 12/18/2008 19:11:53.
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 12/18/2008 19:14:29
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 12/18/2008 19:21:42
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Funny.. doesn't look like Halborn...
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 12/18/2008 20:54:52
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Who? Tried hard to resist the urge to siggify, failed spectacularly.                         
Message edited by Rarebit on 12/18/2008 21:02:38.
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