The first draft version of that, for the sake of comparison, although not all that much changed really:
scene 1- zoom out from inert Wright to Architect viewing in his monitoring room- a: where is thy humanity now...- a: agent gray- gray appears on monitor- g: sir?- a: have you located the program?- g: no, sir; not since it terminated Wright.- g: we have found zion operatives conducting their own search.- a: ...- g: sir?- a: prepare for our visitors- clicks screen offscene 2- ghost lands on a slum building rooftop, looks around, opens a door and goes down a dark stairway- enters a large darkened storage room, doesn't see anything, turns to leave- screen flicks on behind him- s: ghost.- ghost turns and looks at it, face blank- code shimmers in the air and falls down, forming around a standing female body- ghost stands frozen- trinity takes a step toward him, stops- t: ghost...- ghost flinches- trinity looks pained- g: I...- t: I didn't know- p: freeze- pace steps from the doorway into the glow of the monitor/trinity, gun levelled at g- p looks at g- p: predictable.- p: hmh.- p put her gun up, half turns away- p: your program...friend cannot survive here- g looks at p- p: she will be removed. a code lock is already--- h & ts appear in midair, float down to the floor- p puts her gun back on g- ts: ooh. this looks fun.- p touches her earpiece, listens, looks frustrated- p: ... acknowledged.- pace stalks out- h: and you? will you offer resistance?- g: no need- h looks around; trinity has vanished- h: is this your--- ghost has vanished- ts: hah! this *will* be fun- h & ts vanish, room goes dark- a shadow hops up to a high window: ookamiscene 3- ghost is standing on the roof, looking out over the city- g: trinity...
Storyboard animatic:
Lol, I love your drawing of Wright!
Just wait until you come to the actual "lol"...
Heh. *two thumbs up* (and yes... am still here -.O)
Funny.. doesn't look like Halborn...
Who?
Tried hard to resist the urge to siggify, failed spectacularly.
