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Systemic Anomaly

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Torrential rain cascades incessantly onto Esoterix as he races across the roof of a factory, giving chase to a fleeing member of the E Pluribus Neo group.  Lightning makes silhouettes of the contrasting figures, whilst the booms of thunder miss the beats of the rhythmic pounding of their feet against the concrete.  The assailant fires blindly and wildly behind his back hitting nothing but air, whilst Eso occasionally pauses to fire two rapid rounds from a trained stance.  They both leap from one building to the next, making short work of the distances between the rooftops. 

Squinting through the driving rain, Eso notices the ‘EPN' bring his cell-phone to his ear, before placing it back into his jacket pocket and continuing the onslaught of misdirected bullets. 

Fearing that an exit is nearby or that backup has been notified, Eso momentarily relinquishes his own weapon for another.        

Synch sits at the console with his legs resting on a chair, and arms cradling the back of his head. 

He jumps with a start as his headset rings in his ear. "Operator"

"Where is he?"  Esoterix bellows, barely audible through the adverse weather conditions and gunfire.

Synch Straightens up in his chair, and conspiratorially ignores the urgency in the caller's voice.

"Ahh Eso, let me remind you that I'm not your cleaning lady, this morning you left what can only be described as a..."

"WHERE IS HE SYNCH" Roars Eso with increased authority.

"Alright, geez, don't yell at the messenger.  Where do you think he is?  Hi I'm Anne; I'll be your tasty morsel for the afternoon.  Today's specials are my..."

Eso hangs up the phone, reloads his weapon and continues the pursuit.

Frustrated and alone once again, Synch sighs with weary contemplation. "One of these days I'll get to the punch line"


Message edited by exsuscito on 05/16/2007 03:08:12.



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Nice chase sequence and good job establishing the mood.

On to the next...


Systemic Anomaly

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Ingus wrote:
Nice chase sequence and good job establishing the mood.

On to the next...

I wish Ingus would jack in to Vector again. Just once.



Systemic Anomaly

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Zerotolerance wrote:
Ingus wrote:
Nice chase sequence and good job establishing the mood.

On to the next...

I wish Ingus would jack in to Vector again. Just once.

He did during LET'S Club Hel shindig.

Anyway..




Systemic Anomaly

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exsuscito wrote:
Zerotolerance wrote:
Ingus wrote:
Nice chase sequence and good job establishing the mood.

On to the next...

I wish Ingus would jack in to Vector again. Just once.

He did during LET'S Club Hel shindig.

Anyway..

You know I enjoy the suspenseful mood of your writings.

However, some of the punctuation is missing which throws me off. Enjoyable as always, though, Ex.




Systemic Anomaly

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Zerotolerance wrote:
exsuscito wrote:
Zerotolerance wrote:
Ingus wrote:
Nice chase sequence and good job establishing the mood.

On to the next...

I wish Ingus would jack in to Vector again. Just once.

He did during LET'S Club Hel shindig.

Anyway..

You know I enjoy the suspenseful mood of your writings.

However, some of the punctuation is missing which throws me off. Enjoyable as always, though, Ex.

I do now.

Please PM me with examples of such omissions.  That is most annoying that I've posted something which is incomplete.




Systemic Anomaly

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That didn't mean stop writing for my entertainment! D*mn it!



Systemic Anomaly

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Zerotolerance wrote:
That didn't mean stop writing for my entertainment! D*mn it!
I didn't.

 
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