Hmm, yea, well done.
Two things I'd like to say:
1) It somehow felt like there was some text missing from the Machine redpill. I mean, he just said "Data submitted.", no word of a hopping mad Zion squad storming his place... Might have been nice to read a conversation between the operative and the program in the room.
2) The empty box in the first part of the mish, why is it there? It didn't seem of any use.
Actully acording to two of the EPN LOs on Syntax no plan has really been made. Bombing 01 sounds like a dramization on Veil's part to create more of a stir in the war and untill someone can show some sorta proof, its just her word aginst ours.