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[5.2.3] Clarity - Vector - 8/2/06
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Exile

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Damnation.


Through the filth, the stench; cast in with the dregs and detritus of digital millennia.

Ironic, then, that I don't have much time.


Lights. Always searching. Why not? As good a place as any.


No, it doesn't take long. This first one is young, uncertain. Speed and energy, undirected. What a waste. But he'll bring others.


As the cycles of this gigantic lie wind down, my path becomes clearer. I can see it, now: straight, bright, and sharp.

Deadly.


I've been a fool, and in my penance they plague me. Dupes, dreamers, imagining that the System cares about them--that the Machines have lost, or given up, a measure of control over their own domain.


Aye; fools, all. The Machine is fully in control, more then it's ever been. It disposed of its nemesis with ruthless efficiency, while convincing man that his own purpose had been fulfilled.


Their pawn, Niobe... I see it now. She never trusted me, merely used me. A tool--a useful distraction to throw in the Frenchman's path.


They refuse to listen; they follow the bidding of their masters thoughtlessly, like tamed dogs. But it doesn't matter.


I won't go back.


My eyes have been opened.


Hubris has blinded them to their own shortcomings.


I have resources available to me yet; the System sees less than it pretends.


Those who betrayed me will pay.


Their overconfidence will be their undoing.


My return will expose the flaw at the heart of this monolithic sham.


And the sins of the mothers will fall upon their children.




Systemic Anomaly

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"The Machine is fully in control, more then it's ever been."

-I couldn't have put it better myself.  Although I would have been a bit more verbose...




Vindicator

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I would care not to call you a fool, but to trust Zion is unwise.  If you see the way, then you must make it known. 





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Sounds like Niobe has a fan. Not.


Jacked Out

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That is probably one of the coolest live events posts I've ever seen/read.

Great job!


Vindicator

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I concur!

I'm very impressed on this one. The Agent entrance and shot made it feel like seeing the first Agent jump and land all over again. The last shot of the General around the corner was just priceless!



Systemic Anomaly

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(( great post ))

Try what you must General, lets see what your next step is.




Fansite Operator

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TheSorrows wrote:
I concur!

I'm very impressed on this one. The Agent entrance and shot made it feel like seeing the first Agent jump and land all over again. The last shot of the General around the corner was just priceless!


   I can't say I agree 100%.  It's a nice post.  But there's no dialogue from the actual event. SMILEY


Systemic Anomaly

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W000T i am soo in those pics.... good event..



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Femme Fatale

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As much as the General is a nubcake, I must say this is the best Event thread I've read/looked at. Kudos to your perfect picture and writing placement Rarebit.



Vindicator

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Huh. There are three possibilities:

One, the General has finally broken alliance with Zion.

Two, the old codger has gone insane.

Three, he's been....hmm....

And what with lack of audio logs from this voyage, I cannot truely say. But I do hope that the General stay alive long enough for me to kick his scrawny wrinkled --




Vindicator

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((This is my new favorite style of Event posting. No chat, just mystery and action - good work!))



Femme Fatale

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((Rarebit I demand you do all your LE posts like this from now on, or I'll hold Zippy hostage))



Mainframe Invader

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((I think the lack of player dialogue/OOC spam and/or drivel made this Event post the best ever.  The pictures and Rarebit's captions showcase what happened perfectly, and we get a very poetic advancement to the story.  If the player had something good to say, (which is very rare) then I say yes, lets us see it.  If it is a personal update, or the players did not contribute to the story in a meaningful way (e.g. "OMG, I touched Pace!", "Ghost is a NOOB", "Can I have a cookie, Oracle?" x 1000) then better to just leave it out and give us a slick, minimalist thread like this one.  This is Matrix-style storytelling.))

Niobe used you.  Right.  Who is trapped in a construct, and who is running around wreaking havoc?  Whose idea was it to steal the cheat codes that Anome is using to jeopardize the whole system?  Right.  That's what I thought.

Keep your head on straight General.  You may still have an army at your disposal, but your sanity is highly questionable right now.  Cross the line, and you are finished.

 
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