Nice work. I look forward to reading the next parts. I didn't understand the LostProphet dying twice thing, but I assume that was in yours or another COZ's earlier work.
I loved the idea of it. It's sort of like what I did with Inner Demons but completely different at the same time. I must continue with my RP.
* starts to feel all warm and fuzzy* pblade is the pwn ! nice work bro i know its not much from me but yeah i liek it.
xD o.O way to go girl !