The great forthcoming chapter1
it was a wet and rainy night out in the vast megacity. people were laughing and coding things i dont really know what but i continue on a i sit down on a lonely bench next the central hardline. i whisper to myself" they'll soon come very soon then they shall reak havoc on all the people who hate me and disgrace me"!
as i finish that i turn behind me and the sky sort of glows orange and blue and a thousand or so agents and sentinals come swarming down upon mara central. i jump up i jumpwave and whistle then i run into the building east of the hardline . i then abruptly take a seat on a couch in front of the winow facing the hardline.... i hear screams" OMG run everyone ready your weapons,hacks, and your hovercrafts we need to get out of here before they kill us all" and a sick ZZZZZttt and cracking sound is heard. i see a sentinal clamping down a community member by the name of Symmetric or no no it is a Aize . i feel a coldness as a few tears come down not tears of sadness but of happiness. i have won this battle my minions have overun mara and i now own and operate all of it's power sources,security grounds, and military forces. MUhahahahahaha.....i get up walk outside and a Agent Smith is regally walking to me. "Mr.arrween...sir we have won and overrun this place it is now yours for the taking". i laugh a evil and hideous laugh of victory.
.............................Chapter 2 coming soon...............
the great forthcoming chapter 2
its sunny yet pale outside. i wake up and open the shades to find Aize standing back to me and dueling someone . i run out and tip toe up behind him and i knock him out cold. i then open my cell and i call Trifire and he brings his faction and surrounds us and drags Aize into a dark alley and all you can hear is "tham thwamp" " owwww augh" and he dies on the spot. "well done Trifire sir it seems Aize doesnt get the point"
A lone lupine scruff is seen walking fast towards us. "you in the purple croc skin jacket explain yourself or ill have to shred you"!
i walk up and i grab its arm and break it then i smash its face.
it slumps down dead.
the great forthcoming chapter 2
its sunny yet pale outside. i wake up and open the shades to find Aize standing back to me and dueling someone . i run out and tip toe up behind him and i knock him out cold. i then open my cell and i call Trifire and he brings his faction and surrounds us and drags Aize into a dark alley and all you can hear is "tham thwamp" " owwww augh" and he dies on the spot. "well done Trifire sir it seems Aize doesnt get the point"
A lone lupine scruff is seen walking fast towards us. "you in the purple croc skin jacket explain yourself or ill have to shred you"!
i walk up and i grab its arm and break it then i smash its face.
it slumps down dead.
New version shorter(done by me but revised and retold by Neoteny)
It was a wet and rainy night out in the vastness of the Mega City. There was the usual laughing and in addition there were many redpills working dilligently on creating various mysterious and wonderful things. I continued on towards the lonely brown, wooden bench near the hardline and took a seat. It's only a matter of time before they come and wreak havoc on all those who try and make a fool of me... Oh yes, vengance will be sweet..." I silently whisper to myself.
As soon as my silent words are said, I instinctivelyturn my head to look behind my shoulder and notice an odd orange and blue tinge about the sky. Just as suddenly as I notice the odd aura, a great amount of agents appeared and descended upon the whole of the Mara Cenral district, myself included. As quickly as they appeared, I leaped up from my seat upon the wooden bench and do everything I can to attract the attention of the agents- jump, wave, whistle, anything to distract them.
Once I have their attention, well, at least part of it, I make a mad dash into the building east of the hardline and seat myself upon the plush couch facing the window overlooking the hardline. The transparent barrier doesn't bar their screams, the screams of terror that the agents brought with them. It wasn't an unfamiliar sound, but in such an area its effect was much more horrifying. Or perhaps there was another thrill from such screams... one of, dare I say, satisfaction...
"Oh my god!" one operative exclaimed, "Ready your arms and prepare to defend yourself! We don't stand a chance against such a force, tell your operators to prep your hovercrafts and get the hell out of here!" A mysterious and frightening "Zzzzt" sound was heard and suddenly an agent charged and caught Symmetric, no, Aize, around the waist.
There is a sudden cool, wet feeling on my face, a tear running down my cheek. Oh no, I'm not sad... quite the contrary, I'm jubilent. Now you see, these are my minions, and they have seized the day just as they have seized Aize. The battle is won, the day is mine. Agent Smith suddenly appears and marches toward me and formally greets me as per the usual.
"Hello Mr. Arrween. You may have noticed that we have conquered this... place... Please make no mistake, sir, you should well know... it is now... yours."
I throw my head back and maniacally cackle with the fresh scent of victory yet filling my every breath.
Mine, all mine.
(((((i personally like the 2nd version but thats just me))))
