Story Challenge - "You Fought Neo"

**ZippyTheSquirrel** · 03/09/2008 19:01:39

((Here's a fun little game for everyone. Place yourself in the movies as an opponent to Neo, be you baddie or goodie.

Rules: The scene must fit within a single post. Neo must live. You must lose the fight (death optional) or at least be at a clear disadvantage when the fight ends. The action in your fight cannot disrupt the flow of the movie (it can however lengthen a fight scene already in progress).

Here's an example: ))

"God *CENSORED* it, woman, you will be the death of me," the Merovingian muttered. He turned slightly to the side to leave. Neo began to approach him, and he turned back with a raised palm.

"Oh, no-no-no-no, mon adversaire, you will not follow me, non." Abruptly, his palm flickered, and he snapped his fingers.

Above him, the wall suddenly exploded in a shower of bricks. Neo stepped back as the debris fell across his boots. A large figure followed them, crunching the rocks under his neatly shined white dress shoes. As the figure straightened, Neo's eyebrow rose slightly.

Black slacks and a black suit sharply contrasted the white gloves and brilliantly white tie the man wore. His hair, although dyed an odd greenish color, was also neatly groomed and smoothed back. As the man stretched to his full height, he swung a long iron chain that dragged a large spiked ball at the end along the floor. Underneath his sunshade-bearing eyes, a wild grin broke.

With a sudden slash upwards of his arms, he heaved the chain up, flicking the ball at Neo. Neo leaned back as the ball tore through the air his chest had previously occupied. Undaunted, the man spun on his heel with the momentum his swing carried, and began following through with another swipe.

Neo stepped forward and faced the direction the ball came from. With a single hand outstretched, he waited. The chains cackled and clinked. The goon grunted and swore. The ball whistled straight into Neo's hand, with nary a spike piercing his skin.

The large minion's lips twitched, and he simply swung the other direction. Neo's feet dragged on the ground, and then off the ground. The world spun around as he flew through the air. The chain-wielding man let up on the chain until its path carried Neo into the stairway rails. The wood splintered and exploded in all directions as Neo fell through them. He came to the second flight of stairs -- and twisted his body so his feet planted themselves on the stairs below the rail. Standing sideways, he gripped the chain linked to the ball and pulled hard, grimacing slightly with the effort as the goon lifted off the ground.

With a crash, the muscular goof slammed into the balcony. He fell to the ground as Neo nimbly stepped to a 90 degree and righted himself. Neo looked down at the chains in his hands, and swung them above his head. The green haired lackey climbed to his feet quickly, and turned just in time to see Neo swing the ball straight at his face.

Neo spun as Zippy The Squirrel's corpse fell to the ground, and ran towards the door that the Merovingian had just opened.

**Ballak**

I punched Neo in the face for having huge guts.

Neo died.

ThePigeonKing

Ballak wrote:

I punched Neo in the face for having huge guts.
Neo died.

5/5 stars

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