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Ascendent Logic

Joined: Sep 2, 2005
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An awesome story Zippy, I'm really engrossed and can't wait to follow the story as it progresses. I found it really believable and engaging as a story.

The only downside, which you've pointed out, is that you survive and incredibly large amount of encounters with Agents, but the physical trauma your character suffers keeps it fairly credible.

Great stuff, keep it up!!


Vindicator

Joined: Oct 22, 2005
Messages: 8299
Location: Ye Olde Hole Ine The Tree
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((The story here is going under a major overhaul and and will be posted in a more public forum here.

Changes include:

Less me-pwning-Agent-ness
More comedy
More dramatic drama scenes/drawn out drama
Longer battle scenes
The link in my epilogue is no longer valid. Zippy does not go to Blackwood. It's not.. unique enough.
If you want to see some of Zippy's adventures that occur after this story, go here. Most of that is comedy instead of the down-trodden story I'm upgrading now.))

 
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