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 02/07/2009 17:49:50
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Femme Fatale
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FOREWORD: Thought it was about time i finally gave in and posted my comic. I started this last year, round January/February due to the fact that i was looking for something creative to do and i was no good at writing stories and Fraps didn't seem to work on my computer so i couldn't make a movie, plus i my faction leader made comics that i rather enjoyed and wanted to do something similar. So basically i had the idea to do a comic but no idea what to do it about, so like my faction leader i decided to do an origin story (seemed pretty straight forward) and basically used the silly RPish background i had in my details as a jumping off point. And that was about all i had, i basically started taking screenshots for this with no real story, no real ideas and certainly no dialogue, so if it's a bit all over the place you can see why (Basically i just nicked alot of scenes from The Matrix and put a Dulux slant on it, so it's not really much of a story, more a collection of scenes). It should also be noted that i have Vista so some of the screens the faces look all shadowy and although i got Tsusai's fix around about Halloween, i'd basically finished taking the screens at the end of Feb so didn't want to go back and redo alot of them (also you may notice some shots get repeated more than once for pretty much the same reason...i hadn't shot enough for some scenes and i couldn't be bothered going back and re-creating it all how ever many months later). And finally i should say, that while i started this a year ago, it in no way took me that long to do, you'll see it's a tad shoddy with bad grammer and spelling and nowhere near as cool as some of the stuff i seen on here, just i got a short attention span and kept leaving it and coming back to it  Anyways, without any further rambling here it is, hope you enjoy and feel free to criticise... *DISCLAIMER: If you like your Matrix stories, dark, serious and ultra realistic please look away now!* 
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 02/07/2009 17:50:06
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Femme Fatale
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Message edited by Dulux on 02/07/2009 17:55:36.
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 02/07/2009 17:50:24
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Message edited by Dulux on 02/09/2009 11:28:08.
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 02/07/2009 17:50:39
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Femme Fatale
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Message edited by Dulux on 02/11/2009 17:21:11.
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 02/07/2009 17:51:03
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Message edited by Dulux on 02/18/2009 13:13:04.
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 02/07/2009 18:15:49
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Mainframe Invader
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(Awesomesauce, Duluxness. Really enjoyed reading this. Would love to see the additional chapters =] The Matrix's finest Scottish lass for the win!~)
Message edited by XElite on 02/07/2009 18:16:16.
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 02/07/2009 18:24:39
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Vindicator
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Wow, I really enjoyed that! Keep them coming :)
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 02/07/2009 18:50:33
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Veteran Hacker
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Great stuff D! I look forward to reading more. 
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 02/07/2009 19:00:52
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Perceptive Mind
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That was flipping awesome Luxy!! MOAR PLZ!!!
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 02/07/2009 21:47:24
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Clairvoyant
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That was full of so much win..........
     
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 02/07/2009 22:27:46
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Development
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Ooh, Ms. Pac-Man. Good choice. :)
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 02/07/2009 22:33:22
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MC Photographer
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love the monty python refrence made me laugh but that whole thing fits well with mxo right now 
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 02/08/2009 00:07:59
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Femme Fatale
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This is GREAT stuff. Please post more! 
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 02/08/2009 00:15:15
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Perceptive Mind
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That was great. Some really funny parts.
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 02/08/2009 00:26:28
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Ascendent Logic
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Best awakening, ever?
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