A little short of incident, although it is the first chapter of something larger it seems, so that's forgiveable. From how this one ends the next one should be vastly more frenetic, and thus much more exciting.
An enjoyable read overall, and it's always more aesthetically pleasing to employ a comic-book style.
(A few spelling errors could've been edited out)
Nice read. (Although shouldn't it be BloodMavericks over here?)
